Sunday, July 24, 2016

Editing, Round 2

I got my second round of edits this week for the Christmas novella. Which immediately made me reach for my chain saw.

This unusual gut reaction to editing really does make sense. Let me explain. Editing an entire manuscript can be overwhelming, but if you approach it a chapter at a time, it's doable. Same thing with a tree branch. It can be bulky and heavy to start with, but when it gets cut into sizable chunks, it's easy to maneuver.

I cut some words from a chapter, and then cut some logs. I'm making my manuscript tidy at the same time I'm cleaning up my woodpile. I once dated a man from Vermont, where wood fires are common. He told me you should never put a Vermonter in front of an unstacked pile of wood, because they wouldn't come inside until it was arranged in a logical, neat order. It's the same with editing. You're not done until you can read through your entire document with your fingers off the keyboard.

Since this is a novella, there aren't that many chapters to get through, so it should take no longer than a couple days to do the work. Which is good, since I only have three more branches to chop up.

5 comments:

  1. Chopping wood and editing: nice analogy!

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    1. Thanks, Gay. This only goes to prove I can make an analogy out of anything.

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  2. I really like reading (on paper) with a pen in hand about half way through the project. It gives me a good handle on where the story is going.

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    1. Thanks, Lynn, for visiting here today. It's always good to hear how others do it.

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  3. Excellent post, Becky! I find that reading from the hard copy of the manuscript works best for me. Pen in hand, I stop and circle any awkward-sounding phrases.

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